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Old 05-04-2006, 11:50 PM   #61
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It's a good book, everything is good exept The link Zelda romance is stupid! (no offence) and you could put a little more detail in
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Um, excuse me, I did put in more detail. I put in as much detail as possible. AS POSSIBLE!! Now all of you quit bugging me about freakin detail. I try to do my best all right? And another thing, a Link/Zelda romance is NOT stupid! I happen to be a big ZeLink fan, if you don't mind, so I find you rather insulting! Hmph! *folds arms and turns back on coolcwer*
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Old 05-11-2006, 03:40 AM   #64
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It's a good book, everything is good exept The link Zelda romance is stupid! (no offence) and you could put a little more detail in


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Okay people, I'm really trying to get the next chapter done, but I haven't had much of an opportunity to work on it. I should have it done soon, hopefully. I've also been having uploading problems in fanfiction.net. But that's beside the point. The point is, I'll have the next chapter done soon.

And also, I've been wanting to do some pictures for the story. I'd like you all to see how pretty Kelli is and what a beautiful horse Sunfire is. I tried a pic of Kelli, and it came out good. But I decided I wanted to make some small changes. I tried redrawing the pic (I'd already colored the first one) and apparently when I try to redraw stuff, it turns out worse than the first, even when I try to copy or trace sometimes. But I decided, since the first one came out pretty good, I'll try a different pose on Kelli (the first one was just her standing). Like an action pose or something. I had also drawn one of Sunfire and it, too, came out pretty good. But sadly, I lost the picture! Good thing I'm pretty good at drawing horses. Oh, and one more thing. Before I show the work, I need to get my stepdad's scanner.
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I was trying to be Nice!!!! you don't have to yell at people if we don't think it's the best book ever, I said it was good.
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Um, excuse me, I did put in more detail. I put in as much detail as possible. AS POSSIBLE!! Now all of you quit bugging me about freakin detail. I try to do my best all right? And another thing, a Link/Zelda romance is NOT stupid! I happen to be a big ZeLink fan, if you don't mind, so I find you rather insulting! Hmph! *folds arms and turns back on coolcwer*


I was trying to be nice!!!! you don't have to yell at people if they don't like every single thing! but I said it was good.


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I'm not saying I yelled because you didn't like every single thing about the story. I was angry about the part "the link Zelda romance is stupid!" You said it in a mean way. I liked the fact that you said the story itself was good, but that comment about the romance just got me going. You could have been a little nicer about it.
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Guess what? Chapter fifteen!

Chapter Fifteen: The Underground Spirit Dungeon

“You’re right! This is the Underground Spirit Dungeon, Link”, Navi said as Link started towards the door at the other end of the room. When he was about half way there, one of the Armos statues suddenly came to life and began hurdling towards him. Link drew the Master Sword and sliced away at the Armos statue.
Once it was defeated, Link entered the door. Inside, there were switchblades moving on the floor. Link groaned.
“Oh crud”, he said. “Switchblades”. They were moving across the floor in different directions.
“I know, Link. Those things have always been a problem”, Navi stated.
Carefully, Link dodged the switchblades and made it across the room. As he stood there, he noticed above him, on a raised platform, there were two doors. He also noticed to his left was a door with chains and a lock and to his right was a staircase going down. Link went to the staircase.
At the bottom, there was a crystal switch on the ceiling and a door with bars on it. Link took out his bow and fired an arrow at the switch. It made a chest appear near the barred door. But the door itself didn’t open.
Link opened the chest to reveal a small key. Wondering how to open the door, he looked around the room for any more switches. He found none. He then decided to use the Lens of Truth. He found an eye switch hidden behind an invisible portion of the wall to his left.
This was no ordinary eye switch, though. It was indigo colored on one side and orange on the other. Link suspected he had to use the Sun and Moon Arrows on it.
“Link, I believe that’s a power switch you’re looking at”, Navi said, also peering through the Lens of Truth.
“Exactly what I’m thinking”, Link replied, remembering what Kelli had said about combining the sun and moon powers. “Of course, if the power you’re referring to is the combined sun and moon power”.
“Exactly”, Navi said.
Link took out a Sun Arrow and a Moon Arrow. Making their arrowheads touch, he fused the two arrows to become one ultimate form of both powers. The arrowhead of this arrow was indigo on one side and orange on the other, just like the eye switch. Link then fired the arrow at it. It activated and the door opened. Link entered.
Inside, there was a raised platform with a staircase going to it. On the platform there was a door with chains and a lock. But Link was turning his attention to something else: a large treasure chest sitting near a torch in the corner of the room.
“Navi, look! I bet that chest holds the map!” Link almost shouted.
“Yeah”, Navi agreed. Link ran over to the chest and opened it. It indeed held the map. Link looked at it.
“Hmm…this dungeon might take us a little while”, Link stated. “It’s got three floors and quite a bit of rooms on each”.
“Yeah, but there might be some rooms that aren’t necessary”, Navi protested. “Like, for example, we found a few of those in Dodongo’s Cavern”.
“True. But we always visited those rooms anyway”, Link pointed out. “But there’s always the possibility that we could miss them”.
“Yep”, Navi added.
“Well, let’s not stand here chatting about dungeon rooms all day, we need to continue”, Link said. He walked up the staircase and used the key he found earlier to unlock the door. He entered.
They found themselves back in the second room. Link sighed.
“Well, that was pointless”, he commented. Navi disagreed.
“No it wasn’t”, she protested. “Now we can get back to the previous room easily instead of using the stairs”.
“Oh yeah, that’s right”, Link realized. “I doubt we’ll need to use the door again after we go back to the previous room once more, though”.
“Careful! Don’t jinx yourself!” Navi joked.
“Very funny”, Link commented. “Now let’s go back to the other room. I think I saw a Block of Time beneath the platform”. He reentered the previous room and went back down the stairs. Indeed, there was a Block of Time there. Link got out the Ocarina of Time and played the Song of Time. The Block of Time vanished and revealed a hidden door. Link entered it.
During the next few rooms, Link continued to need to do things like hit power switches, make Blocks of Time vanish, and defeat enemies. In one room, he met up with a very familiar mini boss: an Ironknuckle. These were tough to fight, as they inflicted a lot of damage. But since Link, knew easy ways to attack them, they were always a piece of cake for him.
After the Ironknuckle was defeated, Link wound up in the second room again. He started towards the other door, but tripped halfway there and fell off the platform, almost landing in the path of one of the switchblades.
“For cryin’ out loud, how could I be so clumsy?!” Link said, feeling silly about tripping over his own feet. Navi laughed.
“Looks like that door we’d unlocked over there is proving pretty useful right about now”, she giggled.
“Now you just stop it!” Link demanded. “You’re lucky I didn’t get creamed by one of those switchblades, little miss smartypants!”
“Hey, I’m not the one who doubted we’d need to use that door again in the first place, mr. clumsy!” Navi shot back.
“WHAT?!!” Link shouted. “All right, THAT’S IT!! If you think it’s so funny to see someone nearly lose their life, FINE!! See how you like it if I laughed at you almost getting killed!”
“Well maybe YOU need to be more careful when RUNNING!!” Navi shouted back. “It isn’t MY fault you tripped over your stupid feet!”
“Maybe I should’ve been more careful!” Link shot back. “But that doesn’t mean you can go laughing at me!”
“Okay, fine!” Navi gave in. “You’re probably just mad you were wrong”.
“We were both wrong all right?” Link said. “I admit, I was wrong about having to use that door again, but I seriously didn’t mean to be clumsy and trip over my feet!”
“Okay, okay, I admit I was wrong to laugh”, Navi admitted. “Now let’s stop arguing and continue”. Link nodded. He went to the door and entered.
A little later, Link came across the compass. Using it, he found where the boss key was located on the map. It was on the third floor, where the boss room door also resided. He then looked for a way up to the third floor. Along the way, he met up with two more Ironknuckles and more power switches and enemies.
While fighting the final Ironknuckle, Link discovered this enemy was actually a moon monster, and used the Moon Sword to attack it. This told Link moon and sun monsters can be all kinds of regular monsters. Keese, Stalfos, Lizalfos, Dinolfos, Skulltulas, Stalchildren, Ironknuckles, Blue, Red, and Green Bubbles, Armos, Big and small Deku Babas, and many more could all be moon or sun monsters.
A little while afterward, Link finally made it to the boss key and retrieved it. Then he looked at the map to see which way the boss room door was from there. Link saw it was only a few rooms away.
“Now how are we supposed to get there?” Link wondered.
“Try that power switch behind you”, Navi replied. Link turned around.
“Oh, didn’t see that”, Link said and took out his bow. He then fused another Sun Arrow and Moon Arrow and fired it at the switch, which was a crystal switch this time. Link heard a door with bars unlock itself, but a door was nowhere to be found, except the one he came from.
“Hmm, odd…” he said. “Unless…” Link took out the Lens of Truth. He looked around with it.
“It’s behind a hidden wall!” Navi gasped. She was right. As soon as Link saw the door, he entered it.
Going through the small sequence of rooms, Link made his way to the boss room door. In the final room, he met up with some Lizalfos, one of which was a moon monster. After they were defeated, Link entered the boss room.
The boss room looked similar to the one from the Spirit Temple, except there were no raised platforms. And it looked larger.
As Link began walking around in the room, he kept an eye out for Nabooru. He saw her cell right when he approached the middle of the room. It was near the corner to his front left. Suddenly, Link heard a faint woman’s cackle. It got a bit louder as it kept going. Then, out of nowhere a woman, about the size of Twinrova from the Spirit Temple appeared.
“Well, well, what do we have here?” she said in an evil-like tone. “Looks like a fool has come to challenge me”. That got Link going.
“Who are you calling a fool?!” he screamed. “I am Link, the Hero of Time and Guardian of the Moon! I’m no one to mess with!”
“Oh really?” the woman said, sarcastically. “You’re stubborn aren’t you? Looks like I’ll have to deal with you on my own”. Noticing the woman had indigo eyes, Link drew the Moon Sword.
“Bring it on!” he shouted. The woman rose in the air, clutching an indigo-tipped wand in her right hand.
“Very well!” the woman said. “I am Roga, the Spirit Sorceress!” Roga started floating in various directions in the air, still facing Link.
“Navi, quick! How do I defeat her?” Link asked. Before Navi could answer, Roga raised her wand and fired a blaze of evil moon magic.
“Reflect that attack!” Navi called out quickly. Link put up the Moon Shield in front of him as fast as he could and just barely managed to reflect it. It nailed Roga right in the chest. She shrieked as she descended to the floor. Link ran over to her and sliced like crazy. Then Roga got up as Link started running away. But before he could even take two steps, Roga swung her wand at his feet and tripped him. Link landed on his stomach.
“Oh ouch”, he groaned. “Of all the sneaky…”
“Hehehehe”, Roga cackled. Link got up and readied for Roga’s next attack.
“Link, be careful!” Navi warned. “Roga has a number of different attacks!”
“Like what?” Link asked.
“Like that right in front of you!”
Link looked up at Roga who was readying what seemed to be a stronger attack. She fired it. Link dodged it by back flipping.
“Link, when she’s readying that attack, you have to strike it with a Moon Arrow to force it upon her”, Navi instructed. Link nodded. Roga readied another attack, but this one looked different. Guessing what it was going to be, Link got a spin attack ready. Roga fired her attack, which split in to multiple balls of magic, like Link thought. Link released the spin attack.
“HAAAAAH!!” he yelled as he sent the magic balls flying back towards Roga. Once again, she was nailed in the chest and went to the floor. Link ran over to her and sliced. When he was finished, he started to run, but Roga got up and tripped him with her wand again.
“For goddesses sake!” Link shouted. He got up.
“You have skill, Link”, Roga said. “But you are no match for my magic!”
“We’ll see about that!” Link hollered back. Roga readied another attack when she got back in the air. Link realized it was the one he had to hit with an arrow and whipped out his bow. He fired a Moon Arrow at the attack just as Roga had released it. The arrow, with its own power, threw the attack back at her. Once again, she shrieked and fell to the floor. Link ran to her and sliced again like crazy. And once again, Roga tripped him with her wand as he tried to run away.
“Ow!” Link screamed. “Not again”.
“Link, you need to quit being tripped”, Navi said. “You’re hurting your stomach”.
“I know”, Link said. “But I can’t dodge it fast enough”.
“Well, yeah, Roga is pretty quick”, Navi agreed.
After Link had run off, Roga got up again and this time fired the magic blaze attack. Link put up the Moon Shield and reflected it back at her. It nailed her in the chest and she went to the floor again. Link ran to her again and sliced. Then Roga tripped him again.
“All right, that’s the last straw!” Link yelled and got up. Before Roga could get up, Link whipped out his bow again and fired another Moon Arrow at her. It hit her in the chest. Roga screamed loud and fell to her knees.
“Hey, that really was the last straw”, Link said, jokingly.
“You…you…defeated…me”, Roga said. “Curse…YOU!!” After she said her last words, Roga fell to the floor and slowly vanished.
Having defeated the evil sorceress, Link sighed with relief. His stomach was beginning to throb.
“Awww man” he said. “Navi, you were right. My stomach hurts now”.
“It’ll stop eventually”, Navi replied. “Now let’s get Nabooru out”.
“Right”, Link agreed and ran over to the cell in which Nabooru was imprisoned. He fired a Light Arrow at the lock. Nabooru stepped out.
“Link, thank you for saving me!” she said. “Is your stomach okay?”
“Yeah, I’m fine”, Link replied. “But anyway, you’re welcome”.
“Is everyone at the fortress okay?” Nabooru asked.
“I doubt it”, Link replied. “The fortress is in ruins and one of the guards got trapped in the rubble. I had to save her”.
“Oh no”, Nabooru said, worriedly. “I hope we have enough uninjured Gerudos to rebuild the fortress”.
“Well, the guard I saved is the only one I know of that was hurt”, Link added.
“That’s good”, Nabooru said. “And speaking of hurt, I see your right arm is bandaged”.
“Oh that’s from when I saved Impa”, Link stated. “It’s a bite”.
“I see”, Nabooru replied. “For saving me, I reward you this diamond”. She handed Link an orange diamond that had the Spirit emblem on it. The Spirit Diamond, too, had a slight glow like the others.
“Five down, one to go”, Link told himself.
“Let’s get out of here”, Nabooru insisted. Link nodded. Then they stepped in the blue portal that had appeared earlier.

Well, do you like it? I thought it turned out rather funny. Link has only one more sage to rescue before he goes to the final dungeon with Kelli. And that sage is Rauru.
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Still one to go?
Man, why can't people protect themselves?
Ah well, in the temple of light it's definitly not as dark as in the other temples.
Maybe Link needs some sunglassesXD

The final dungeon, is it Ganons Tower, or another underground place?
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Ah, but the seventh and final dungeon is Hyrule Castle itself. Just turned evil. And about dungeon #6, it's underground, but in a place that no one, not even Link, would've expected. And it's not under the Temple of Time.

Here's a hint about the final dungeon: going through this place is a tad bit similar to going to Vaati in TMC, except Link doesn't go to the castle's roof.
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Hmm, where could it be...?

There are alot of places I wouldn't expect: Under my bed, in Link's house, at the psychiatrists, in a junk yard, in a pub...

But apart from the 2nd, I doubt it's any of them.
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Heh, well you'll find out in the next chapter. If I ever get a chance to start it. I've just been too busy this week. School work, chapter ideas, scenes for certain stories in the NP sequel series (particularly the third one), and I haven't had much time on the computer.
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Hyrule field, Lon Lon ranch... Don't know, I'll read it again for clues
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