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Old 06-17-2006, 06:46 AM   #91
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I like it,and could you tell me the ansew to the mystery
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Old 06-17-2006, 06:49 AM   #92
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I suggest that if you want to improve your writing you immediately stop reading fan fiction and switch over to some literature.
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Old 06-17-2006, 08:05 AM   #93
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I like it,and could you tell me the ansew to the mystery

As much as I'd love to, sorry! There's still one more clue to be given, so I can't. And speaking of that, there's a little prize for the ones who solve it correctly. It's a surprise!

So after that clue is given, get solving! I'm telling you, this isn't that hard if you know what each clue means.
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Old 06-18-2006, 05:33 AM   #94
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Is it ok to send a PM with my answer though the last clue isn't finished?

Or do I have to wait until the chapter is written?
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Old 06-18-2006, 12:12 PM   #95
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I don't know. It really wouldn't be fair to the others who would have to wait and I'd rather wait anyway, because getting that last clue would increase your chance of getting the answer right. But if this mystery gets you really stumped and you can't seem to figure it out (which I doubt) then sure, I'll have to give you a little help.

I'm telling you, my stories are kind to its readers. I don't think any other story would have this kind of thing for you, whether it's a mystery or trivia or something else (oh boy, now I'm starting to sound like Beedle in TWW ). Speaking of that, I've picked the number of questions for each story (Did I already mention it? I'm not sure. If I did, I probably changed it). LoZ: Newfound Powers will have 25, the bonus story will have 15, and each sequel in the sequence stories will have 20. That's a lot of questions, but since I love trivia so much, I'm more than willing to do this!
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Ok, I can wait, though I think I figured it out.

Wait, 40 questions plus 20 per sequel?
That is heckuva lot. I love this kind of thing.
*chewing nervously on my pencil while waiting*
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Old 06-18-2006, 12:31 PM   #97
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Heh, now you see why I'm such a trivia fan. One of my favorite boardgames is Trivial Persuit for Juniors (the regular version is too hard for me). I also like 20 Questions and Disney Trivia (I used to win this game all the time against my mom ).

Anyway, the next chapter should be done soon. And now that I'm out of school for the summer, I should be getting the rest of the chapters up faster.
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Old 06-19-2006, 07:49 AM   #98
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Guess what? Chapter eighteen.

Chapter Eighteen: Back to Kakariko

Link and Rauru landed next to the hollow tree. As Link was about to leave, he thought of something.
“Oh crud, how am I going to find my way out of here?” Link asked.
“Just keep going in that direction away from this tree and you’ll be back at the Temple of Time”, Rauru replied, pointing in the direction in front of the door on the tree.
“Okay”, Link commented. “What about you?”
‘I’m taking a shortcut back to Kakariko”, Rauru stated. “You’re going there too, right? Well, I guess I’ll see you there”. Link nodded. They parted.
Link made sure to keep going in the same direction back to the Temple of Time. When he arrived, he went back to the front and started through Hyrule Castle Town, dodging the Gibdos on his way out.
Outside town, Link mounted Epona and headed for Kakariko Village. On his way there, he felt a little concerned. He thought about what Rauru had said about Ganondorf discovering he had the Ocarina of Time. Gee, I wonder if Ganondorf already knows I have the ocarina, he thought. If he does, I just hope Kelli’s okay. She’s my only hope in defeating him once and for all! Hmm…now that I think about it, he’s likely to go after her if he knows of her whereabouts! I’d better be quick about this.
Link made Epona speed up. In just a few seconds, Link was at the entrance to Kakariko Village. He dismounted Epona and entered. Inside, the place looked as if it hadn’t been attacked since Kelli defeated the giant lizard monster. Link expected to hear Kelli humming her song, but he didn’t hear it. Instead, he saw Kelli near the well, trying to fend off some strange looking men. Link’s mouth fell open. Seconds later, he saw one of the men throw Kelli to the ground. That got him going.
“Kelli!” Link shouted as he ran up to the men and Kelli. One of the men tried to grab Kelli as she was on the ground, but she rolled out of the way and kicked the man right between the legs. The man yelped in pain as he went to the ground. Kelli got up as he did.
“Link, help me fight these guys!” Kelli shouted just after she noticed Link standing there. Link drew his sword and attacked. All the men except one gasped at the sword and ran.
“Link”, Kelli said quietly to Link. “This isn’t good”. The man attacked. Link tried to fend him off, but got knocked to the ground in the process. Kelli tried to help him up, but the man wouldn’t let her. He kept trying to knock her to the ground as well. At one point, Kelli stumbled and fell on the man, her sword stabbing him in the process. Kelli gasped and suddenly got up. She looked at the man on the ground with surprise.
“D-did I just…kill him?” Kelli asked, nervously.
“I think so”, Link replied. “You stabbed him in the chest. He couldn’t survive that”.
“Oh no…what have I done?” Kelli said, dropping to her knees and covering her face with her hands.
“Kelli, c’mon, he was a bad guy”, Link remarked. “It was good you killed him”.
“Yeah, but…I’ve never killed anyone before…” Kelli replied, taking her hands away from her face.
“You’ve killed monsters”, Link pointed out.
“Link, that’s different”, Kelli protested. “I’ve never killed an actual person until now”.
“I see what you mean”, Link replied. “Anyway, who were those people?”
“Ganondorf’s followers, no doubt”, Kelli said. “I can sense it, as I can any danger”.
“I know”, Link commented.
“You do? How?”
“Rauru told me”.
“I should have known”, Kelli said. “He wanted you to know so you’d be able to know if any followers were stalking us, didn’t he?”
“Yep”, Link replied. “I’ve learned more than that about you as well”.
“Oh?”
“Yeah, Malon told me she knows you in person and that you had a tough childhood”, Link stated. “She didn’t tell me anymore than that except that she’s heard you sing”.
“Heh”, Kelli replied. “Well, what she said is true. My childhood was tough, though I don’t remember too much of it”.
“I see”, Link commented. He was suddenly reminded of the other things Malon said. Kelli started giggling.
“You have that look about you, Link. That Malon said something about you being a pretty darn handsome guy”, she said. Kelli giggled some more. Link smacked his forehead.
“Kelli, please don’t bring that up”, Link replied, nervously.
“Well, she’s right. You are very handsome”, Kelli stated. “Zelda more than likely thinks so too”. She kept giggling. Link blushed.
“Kelli, please, I’m not in the mood”, Link complained. “And anyway, what about you? You’re quite a pretty girl”. Kelli suddenly stopped giggling. It was true. She was very pretty, with her blonde hair and blue eyes.
“I mean, I’d be surprised if there weren’t any guys attracted to you already”, Link continued. It was Kelli’s turn to blush. Suddenly, Link noticed her eyes flash red. He was shocked.
“Whoa! Kelli! What was that?! Your eyes--”, Link started, but Kelli cut him off.
“Flashed red, I know. They change colors with my emotions”, Kelli explained. “But c’mon, Link, just because I think you’re handsome, doesn’t mean you have to go getting back at me for it”.
“Yeah, but you don’t know how many times I’ve blushed in the past day”, Link shot back. “I can think you’re pretty if I want to”.
“And I can think you’re handsome if I want to”, Kelli added. “Look, I don’t want to argue okay? Let’s just get out of here and go to the castle”.
“Fine by me”, Link agreed.
“Though, first I need to find Sunfire”, Kelli stated. “I let her run around the field. She would’ve needed the exercise”.
“I see”, Link replied. “How are we going to find her?”
“Well, I can either use Epona’s Song, or I could lure her to me using carrots or apples, since she never wanders too far from wherever I am”, Kelli replied as they left Kakariko.
“You could use Epona’s Song?” Link asked, surprised. “Sunfire must be fond of it like Epona then”.
“Yep”.
Back in Hyrule Field, Kelli looked around to see if she could spot Sunfire in the distance somewhere. She was no where to be seen.
“Odd. I’d think she wouldn’t have gone anywhere past Lon Lon Ranch”, Kelli stated. “Looks like I’ll have to use Epona’s Song”.
“Yes, please”, Link agreed. “I just noticed Epona has vanished too”.
“Hmm”, Kelli replied. “Will she recognize my voice, though?”
“Oh sure”, Link said. “Epona will come to anybody who plays or hums her song, as long as they get the notes right”.
“Okay, then”, Kelli commented. Link was secretly happy Kelli was going to hum, as he wanted to hear her pretty voice again. Kelli started humming. Link smiled as he watched and listened.
A few seconds later, Epona and Sunfire came into view, galloping over the bridge across the river towards Link and Kelli. They stopped in front of them. Link noticed something about Sunfire that he never noticed before. There were bands with Triforce marks on her ankles.
“Kelli, what are those?” Link asked, pointing to the bands.
“Huh?” Kelli replied, giving Link a blank look. Then she noticed he was pointing to the Triforce bands Sunfire wore. “Oh those! Those are for telling which horses belong to the castle and which don’t. That’s why the bands have Triforce marks on them”.
“Oh, I see”, Link commented as he and Kelli mounted their horses. “That must be how you were able to tell Sunfire was the runaway horse when she ran away”.
“That’s right”, Kelli added. They headed for Hyrule Castle Town. Since it wasn’t that far, it took them less than a minute to get there. When they did, Link and Kelli dismounted their horses and entered the ruins of the town.
Inside, the Gibdos were standing around and the place looked spooky as usual, but Kelli sensed something was wrong. She hesitated.
“Oh no”, she said. “I’m sensing something”.
“What is it?” Link wondered.
“Ganondorf…he found out you have the Ocarina of Time”, Kelli began. “…His followers ran to him after they saw the Master Sword in your hands…they told him of it…Ganondorf was furious…he knew if you had the Master Sword…you had to have the ocarina…now he’s done even more damage to the kingdom…” As Kelli finished, Link’s eyes widened with nervousness.
“Oh no…” he commented. “This is bad. He’ll kill Zelda if we don’t get up there fast!”
“Oh no!” Kelli cried.
“Well, let’s not just stand here, c’mon!” Link almost shouted and grabbed Kelli by the wrist, running towards the castle with her. They ignored the Gibdos as they ran and entered the castle grounds.
Once there, they noticed more lava now surrounded the castle and it looked more disastrous than ever. Link saw the sages’ bridge had reappeared in front of the entrance. He motioned Kelli to follow him across it and to be careful. They entered the castle.

Well? Link and Kelli have just entered the final dungeon, Evil Hyrule Castle. It's much different this time than it was in OoT and longer too. Also, Ganondorf doesn't turn into ol' pig face. He won't need to, as he is more powerful than Ganon now.
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Old 06-21-2006, 06:08 AM   #99
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Okay, just letting you know that the next chapter may take me awhile, as there's lots happening in the castle. And also, the final battle takes a little while.

I'm still waiting patiently to hear what you think of chapter eighteen! ^_^
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Old 06-22-2006, 05:47 PM   #100
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and the ansew to the mystery is..
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Old 06-25-2006, 10:22 AM   #101
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Oh, there's something I forgot to mention about my future stories. I won't be posting them in fanfiction.net, because I don't think it's worth it. I mean, I haven't gotten a review there in months. I don't want post any more stuff there if it's not going to get reviewed. That would be dumb.

I'm just letting you all know so there won't be any confusion.

EDIT: Oh yeah, and some more replies here would be nice.
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Old 06-26-2006, 04:36 AM   #102
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i like it,but wouldn't there be a trip to the sacraded realm every time they get freed?
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Old 06-27-2006, 05:25 AM   #103
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I'm not sure what you're trying to ask. Are you saying wouldn't Link automatically go to the Sacred Realm after each sage is freed? If so, no, because it's not necessary. With Link and the sage being freed at the dungeon itself instead of the sage appearing in the Sacred Realm, there is no need to go there. You get what I'm saying?
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Sorry this took so long, but the second to last chapter is here!

Chapter Nineteen: Evil Hyrule Castle

Inside the evil infested castle, Link and Kelli looked around what would be the main chamber. Torches lined the walls where Keese were flying near and a large torn red carpet decorated the floor. On either side of the room, there was a small staircase leading up to a higher platform on which sat a door. One of the doors was another staircase going down to the castle’s prison cells. At the other end of the room, there was another door, except it had a lock and chains on it.
“Gee, it looks like we’re going to be quite busy in here”, Kelli observed.
“I hear that”, Link commented. “We aughta be careful in here. This place is probably loaded with traps”.
“I agree”, Kelli replied. “I’m also sensing the castle’s been cursed. How to break the curse and return it to normal, I don’t know”.
“Well, we won’t do much just standing here, we got a choice of two ways to go: the door to our left or the stairs to our right”, Link pointed out. “I say we go through the door. It might lead us to a way upstairs to the tower”.
“Yeah, but something’s telling me we want to go down the stairs”, Kelli protested.
“Alright”, Link replied. “I suppose I should trust you if you say we should go somewhere”. They walked up the small staircase and down the stairs in the doorway.
At the bottom, the prison area looked just as spooky as it had when Link and Kelli rescued the King from it. Cobwebs lined the walls where the torches stood. Cracks and dents in the walls also stood out.
As they were walking down the long corridor past the prison cells, they suddenly heard something move. They hesitated.
“What was that?” Link whispered.
“I don’t know”, Kelli whispered back, looking around. She found nothing.
“Pssst! In here!” a voice suddenly called out in a whisper. Link and Kelli were startled.
“Huh?” Kelli replied, confused. The voice cried out again.
“Over here!” Link noticed the voice was coming from one of the cells. He motioned Kelli to follow him. They walked down to the cell and found somebody inside. Link was shocked at who it was.
“Malon! How’d you get in there?!” he exclaimed, surprisingly.
“Ganondorf’s followers captured me”, Malon replied. “I was on my way to Kakariko to run an errand for dad when they found me. They questioned me about your whereabouts, but I said I didn’t know. They didn’t believe me and kept asking. I kept saying I had no idea where you were and so they just decided to put me in here”.
“Whoa”, Link commented.
“When did this happen?” Kelli asked.
“Just after Link’s second visit to the ranch”, Malon replied. “Dad’s probably worried about me now”.
“I’ll take you back”, Kelli offered. “The town’s dangerous”.
“Thanks, Kelli!” Malon replied. “You’re a real friend!” Kelli smiled.
“First we need to find a key to unlock your cell”, Link pointed out.
“It’s hanging over there on the wall”, Malon said. She pointed to a key hung up near a table just a few feet away from them. Link grabbed it and unlocked the cell. Malon walked out.
“Thanks for rescuing me, guys!” Malon cried.
“No problem”, Link replied. “You should be quick about getting Malon back, Kelli. We don’t have all day to rescue Zelda you know.
“I know”, Kelli remarked. “I’ll meet you back upstairs okay?”
“Okay”, Link replied. “Don’t forget to use the secret staircase to get out of here”.
“What staircase?” Malon asked.
“I’ll explain later”, Kelli replied. “Follow me”. Kelli and Malon went down one end of the long corridor. Link went down the other and back up the stairs to the main room. Hmm..., he thought. Maybe I should explore the castle a little bit before Kelli comes back. Hope she won’t mind if she comes back before I do.
Link went up the other staircase to the door since the door on his level was locked. He entered.
Inside, an Ironknuckle was standing at one end of the room, a door at another, and a pair of crests on the floor in the middle of the room. One crest was sun and the other was moon. There was also a pair of torches sitting by the wall near the moon crest. The door at the one end of the room had bars on it. Link had a suspicion playing Zelda’s Lullaby on the moon crest or Kelli humming her song on the sun crest would make a treasure chest appear between the two torches. He decided to try the moon crest and see what happens.
Link walked to the crest. He took out the Ocarina of Time and played Zelda’s Lullaby. It made a treasure chest appear, but not between the torches. Link looked up to see the chest sitting on an elevated platform. The chest was a big one too. There was no hookshot point on the wall above the platform, so Link had no way of getting up there.
“Aw man”, Link complained. “Looks like we’re going to need Kelli to help us out in here”.
“Looks like it”, Navi agreed.
“Well, back to the main room”, Link said. They went back. Link sat down on the stairs nearby and waited for Kelli to return. Just as he sat down, she walked through the door.
“Hey, Link!” Kelli called out. She ran over to him. “You ready to continue?”
“Yep”, Link replied. “I already went through that door behind me, but I need your help in there”.
“Okay”, Kelli said as they went through the door. “What’s the problem?”
“Well, I played Zelda’s Lullaby on that moon crest on the floor over there and it made a large treasure chest appear”, Link explained. “But look where the chest appeared”. He pointed to the elevated platform the chest was on.
“Oh dear”, Kelli commented, noticing there was no hookshot point. “Well, let’s see what humming my song on the sun crest I see will do”. She walked up to the crest and started humming. Link listened. After Kelli finished, Link noticed a ladder appear at the platform, giving them a way up to the chest.
“Kelli, look!” Link exclaimed. “A ladder! I should have guessed”.
“Indeed”, Kelli replied. She climbed the ladder, followed by Link.
“Kelli, I forgot to mention something”, he said. “Look over there”. Link pointed to the Ironknuckle standing to the ladder’s left.
“I saw it”, Kelli commented. “I think we have to destroy that Ironknuckle to open the door”.
“Yeah, I think so too”, Link added. Kelli opened the chest after they made it to the top of the ladder. It was the map.
“What in blazes…?!” Kelli exclaimed. “Link, is this…an evil map?” Link walked up to her and took a peek at it.
“Yep”, he replied. “You know about them?”
“I’ve heard of them, but I’ve never encountered one before”, Kelli told Link. “How do you know about them?”
“I found one in the last dungeon I was in”, Link replied. “Lucky for me, though, I was able to figure that crazy thing out”.
“Good, then you can navigate for us”, Kelli concluded. “Here”. She handed the map to Link. He took it.
“And I can just show you what everything on the map means, so if we get separated or something, you can know how to find me again”, Link added.
“And that too, I guess”, Kelli remarked. She took another look at the map. Link pointed out everything on the map that was necessary to know. He showed Kelli their location, which rooms were which, what were doors, and which floors were which.
“You understand this now, Kelli?” Link asked when he finished.
“I think so”, Kelli replied. “Yeah, I got it”.
“You sure?”
“Positive”.
“Okay”, Link commented. “Then you shouldn’t need to ask a question about this possibly until we get the compass”. They climbed down the ladder.
At the bottom, Link drew the Master Sword and hit the Ironknuckle to awaken it. Kelli was about to slash at it, when she noticed the eyes were orange.
“Link, let me handle this thing!” Kelli shouted just after she’d drawn her sword and shield. “It’s sun!” Link then glanced at the Ironknuckle’s eyes. Kelli was right.
“Alright, I got you covered, then!” Link hollered back. Kelli had slashed the Ironknuckle a few times. Suddenly, she had an idea.
“Hey, Link! Watch this!” Kelli shouted. She readied a spin attack.
“HAAAAAH!” she shouted as she released it and spun several times around the Ironknuckle, slashing it in the process. Link was so amazed, he dropped his sword.
“Wow…” he said as the Ironknuckle was destroyed. “Kelli, how in Hyrule did you do that?!” Kelli walked up to Link, looking dizzy.
“Simple”, she said, trying to hold back the dizziness. “It’s called the Hurricane Spin. Just ready a spin attack, then release it, then spin around with it several times, like I just did”.
“It’s that simple?” Link asked. “Neat. Though it seems to get you dizzy afterward”.
“Yeah”, Kelli agreed. “But it’s one of the most powerful attacks I know. It takes out some monsters in one hit”.
“I saw that”, Link commented. “Well, let’s continue”. Kelli nodded. They entered the door that had opened.
As they continued through the castle, Link and Kelli encountered more puzzles to solve and more tough enemies. By the time they made it to the second floor, they’d already met up with a Lizadinolfos and another Ironknuckle.
A couple rooms after the Ironknuckle, they came across the compass, which, of course, was an evil compass. Link showed Kelli that the little dots that the compass made appear on the map were treasure chests.
“Gee, Link, I don’t think I would’ve ever figured this stuff out on my own”, Kelli commented.
“That’s impossible”, Link commented. “Besides Zelda, you’re the wisest girl I’ve met! I mean, you practically gave me most of the info I needed to get this far!”
“Thanks!” Kelli smiled. “Maybe I could’ve figured it out”.
“Yeah, in fact, I think you’d figure it out faster than me”, Link added.
“Heh”, Kelli commented. They continued.
By the time they reached the third floor, they’d met up with another Ironknuckle and Lizadinolfos. However, it was in the same room this time. After that, Link was expecting to find a boss key soon. He checked the map. He and Kelli only had one more floor to get to before they reached the base of the tower where Zelda was being held. He also noticed there weren’t that many treasure chests left to get.
When they were about half way through the third floor, Kelli accidentally dropped her bow after using it. Suddenly, a Stalfos they were fighting grabbed it and ran off.
“Hey!!” Kelli screamed and ran after the Stalfos. She chased it through a nearby door.
“Kelli, wait up!” Link called after her. He ran through the door that Kelli and the Stalfos disappeared through. Kelli was no where to be found. It was as if she vanished into thin air.
“Oh great”, Link groaned and smacked his forehead. “I’ve lost her”. Link decided to check the map to see which way Kelli could’ve gone.
“Great job on jinxing someone again, Link”, Navi joked.
“Navi, what are you talking about?” Link asked, confused.
“Remember you said if you two get separated, Kelli will know how to find you after you showed her the stuff on that map?” Navi replied. “You jinxed her”. Link suddenly remembered.
“Oh yeah”, he said, smacking his forehead again. “Well, let’s not stand here, we need to find Kelli!” Link continued looking at the map. He noticed something on the map that wasn’t there before.
“Navi, look! A purple dot appeared on the map!” Link exclaimed. “Could that be Kelli’s location?”
“Probably”, Navi replied. Link noticed the dot was only a few rooms away.
Meanwhile, in another room, Kelli was fighting the Stalfos that took her bow. She jump attacked it, making it fall and drop it. Kelli dashed for it and picked it up. She put an arrow on the bow and fired it at the Stalfos, killing it.
“That’ll teach you to mess with my weapons, you stupid bag of bones!” Kelli screamed at it. Seconds later, Link came rushing in the room.
“Kelli!” he gasped. “I knew it! That dot was her location, Navi!”
“Huh?” Kelli replied, giving Link a blank look.
“Just after you ran off, a purple dot appeared on the map”, Link explained. “I thought that was where you were”.
“Oh”, Kelli said. “I’m sorry. I had to get my bow back. I wouldn’t have run off if that Stalfos hadn’t taken it”.
“Yeah, but didn’t you hear me yell to wait up?” Link asked.
“No”, Kelli replied. “Sorry”.
“It’s okay”, Link commented. Let’s just move on”. Kelli nodded. They continued.
When they finally made it to the fourth floor, they looked at the map to see which way they had to go to get to the tower. They also noticed only two treasure chests remained in the castle, now. In the room just before the tower, they met up with an Ironknuckle and two Lizadinolfos. One of the Lizadinolfos was moon, and the other was sun. The Ironknuckle was a normal monster. Link and Kelli killed off the Lizadinolfos first, and then went for the Ironknuckle. After they finished, they entered the tower.
“Hmm, we’re in the tower, but we still haven’t found a boss key”, Link pointed out, knowing they’d gotten those last two treasure chests.
“I guess there isn’t a boss key this time”, Kelli concluded.
“I guess”, Link added. They climbed the stairs all the way up to the first door they saw. Link hesitated.
“If we’re going to use that combination attack on Ganondorf, which I believe we will, then I’d better do something real quick”, he said. “Make it easier for us”. He switched hands with the Moon Sword and Shield, which he’d switched with the Master Sword and Mirror Shield earlier. Kelli gasped.
“Link, I didn’t know you were ambidextrous!” she exclaimed.
“Heh. I didn’t know either, until Zelda told me I was”, Link replied.
“I see”, Kelli commented. “I’m a mixy. That means I use different hands for different things. It’s like the opposite of ambidextrous”.
“Mix-handed, huh?” Link said. “You’re the first person I’ve met who’s like that!”
“Neat!” Kelli replied with a smile. “Let’s go in now”. Link nodded. They entered.
Inside, Ganondorf was playing his organ, which Link and Kelli had heard on their way up the tower. Link noticed a door to the organ’s right. It had a bright blue lock and chains on it. Link suspected it was the door that led to Zelda’s chamber. He and Kelli walked to the center of the room, their swords drawn. As they stopped, Ganondorf stopped playing the organ and turned around.
“Link…we meet again”, he said.
“Yes, and this time, it won’t be one on one!” Link shouted. Ganondorf glanced over at Kelli.
“Well, well”, he laughed. “Kelli’s with you. What are you, afraid to face me alone?!”
“I am not!” Link shot back, furiously.
“Ganondorf, what are you plotting?!” Kelli demanded. “And how do you know about me?! Explain yourself!”
“As much as I would love to, I cannot”, Ganondorf replied, sounding sarcastic. “It is a secret of your past, your destiny as the famed Guardian of the Sun. That, you must discover yourself, and which you never will!” He laughed an evil laugh. Kelli got angry.
“Alright, you’ve asked for it!” she shouted. “Shall we, Link?” Link nodded.
“Right!” They raised their swords until their tips touched. Just after that, a ball of orange and indigo light appeared where the sword tips had touched. The orange and indigo fused and the light grew bigger, as if it were a star. When it was big enough and had enough power, Link and Kelli released it, sending the ball of light flying at Ganondorf.
“Feel the power of the sacred powers combined!” Link shouted just before he and Kelli released their attack. It hit Ganondorf right in the chest and he went to the floor. Link and Kelli jump attacked him at the same time.
“Don’t underestimate our combined power, Ganondorf!” Kelli yelled afterward. “You’re outnumbered!”
“Oh, don’t worry, I won’t be for long”, Ganondorf replied. “Take THIS!!” He suddenly got up and fired a magic attack at Kelli, and before she could even put up her shield to block it, it hit her so hard, she lost her balance and fell out of a nearby window. Kelli screamed as she fell. Link gasped.
“KELLI!! NO!!” he screamed and ran to the window. Ganondorf laughed his evil laugh. Kelli was hanging from a statue on the castle’s wall. She tried hard to hold on.
“Kelli!” Link shouted. “Are you okay?!”
“I’m fine!” Kelli replied. “I can’t get back up, so you’ll have to fight Ganondorf on your own!”
“No, Kelli, I need you!” Link protested. “I can’t do this without you! Give me your hand! I’ll pull you up!”
“No, I can’t reach!” Kelli replied. “You must defeat Ganondorf by yourself! There’s no other way!”
“No! I’ll find a way to save you!” Link shouted back. “I don’t want to let you fall!”
“Link, no! Defeat Ganondorf!” Kelli protested. “You must! The kingdom is counting on you! I’m counting on you! Zelda’s counting on you…”
“But…”
“Link, save her first”, Kelli insisted, sounding a little weak. “Trust me”.
“But I’m…I’m scared”, Link admitted. “I’ve never had…to kiss a girl…”
“Don’t be afraid, Link. You can do this”, Kelli encouraged him. “Conquer your fear and save your princess. Please. I have faith in you…” Link smiled a little.
“Alright, I’ll do it”, Link gave in. “Thanks, Kelli. I feel confident now!” He left the window and turned to Ganondorf with a furious look on his face. Ganondorf laughed.
“What’s so funny?” Link asked, angrily.
“You, the one that’s supposed to be Hyrule’s greatest hero…scared of a little kiss?!” Ganondorf replied. He continued laughing.
“You won’t be laughing when I turn you into a pile of bones!” Link shot back. “And you’ll be sorry you ever knocked Kelli out of that window!”
“Oh really?” Ganondorf commented, sarcastically. “Let’s see you try to kill me!” He attacked Link with a ball of magic. Link dodged it.
“You’ll have to do better than that!” he shouted. He whipped out his bow and fired a Light Arrow at Ganondorf. It hit him, but he was not stunned, as he used to be. Link gasped.
“Don’t think a puny Light Arrow will smite all the evil power I wield”, Ganondorf stated. “I wield power that is much stronger than what it can handle”. That gave Link an idea. He took out a Sun Arrow and Moon Arrow and fused them. He fired the new arrow at Ganondorf.
“And that power is the evil power of the sun and moon”, Link finished. He ran to Ganondorf, who was now stunned. Link sliced him.
A few seconds later, Ganondorf got up. He started sword-fighting Link. Link parried Ganondorf a couple times, but it didn’t give him enough time to fire another power arrow. Ganondorf, on the other hand, had thrown Link to the ground once and tried to strike him with his sword like that, but Link tried to roll out of the way and wound up getting a stab to the leg.
“AAAH!” Link screamed. Ganondorf chuckled to himself. Link got up, trying to ignore the pain from the deep cut on his left leg. He parried Ganondorf once more before he went back to magic attacks.
“You’ve gained skill, I see”, Ganondorf commented. “I commend you”. He started attacking with magic attacks again. Link used the Moon Shield to reflect the moon attacks and he dodged the others. He was only hit a few times.
At one point, Link was knocked over and Ganondorf pinned him to the floor. Link tried to break free, but it was no use. Ganondorf was too strong.
“You’ve seen your last, boy!” Ganondorf yelled as he had his sword raised to strike Link. Suddenly, Link had an idea.
“Oh yeah? Think again!” he yelled back and kicked Ganondorf off him. He landed flat on his back. Link got up and quickly switched the Moon Sword with the Master Sword. He ran up to Ganondorf before he could get up and gave him the final blow with a jump attack, the sword pointing to Ganondorf’s chest. He suddenly got up to his knees, clutching his chest.
“I may be defeated…but you’ll never awaken your precious princess!” Ganondorf said his final words and fell back on the floor, face down this time.
Link dropped to his knees, wincing in pain as the blood from the cut on his left leg spilled out. He just sat there, looking at the dead Ganondorf. He couldn’t believe what had just happened.
“I did it”, Link said. “I can’t believe it”. The evil king was gone forever!

Well? I think the final battle turned out pretty cool. Just one chapter left!
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Well? Doesn't anybody want to comment on chapter nineteen? I've waited a couple days now. I admit, I don't reply to other people's stories much, but that's because I don't find stories that are worth replying to very often. I must say, it's hard to impress me when it comes to story writing.

In fact, my own story really doesn't impress me too much. Well, it does impress me, just not a lot.
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